I have a pocket full of quarters and no place to go
My heart aches and I feel low
My mom says I'll get over this feeling of dread
My dad tells me it's all in my head
My brother is annoying and I am quite mad
My sister tells me not to be so sad
I mope on the couch and can't explain why
I feel like I want to cry
I have a pocket full of quarters and no place to go
This sad boy feels so low
Author notes
sad,mad,lonely,down
A contest entry
- Ages 13 and UNDER -- Pick a title and write about it by Amunet Wolfbane.
525 points, ended April 19, 2007, 7 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - 10 options for the creative poet by bananasfoster42.
700 points, ended August 2, 2007, 30 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Contest for 13 and younger only by Kari.
425 points, ended October 6, 2007, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Good job, and good luck
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awesome write. ha, i feel ya! thanks for entering!
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Great job with your rhyme in this piece. I really enjoyed and your style. Excellent piece
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Very good and emotion filled. This made me sad. Good luck in the contest!
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Wow sad indeed. Is this a true story? Filled with lots of emotion and heartache. Nicely done.
Good luck in the contest.
Brian
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