i was brought into this world as i am.
and as i am is the person i despise most.
living daily is a lie.
i die on daily basis.
see my lie?
i was brought into this world as i am.
and as i am is the person with no future.
no hopes.
no dreams.
no inspiration to live.
no will.
no faith.
absolutly dead.
im carving myself anew.
with this knife i thee wed.
for only it shall know the passion in my actions.
the actions that have been brought forth to my attention time and time again.
i was brought into this world as i am.
and as i am is someone carving herself.
a simple cut here and a cut there.
thats how i'll loose forty pounds in a week.
dont deny me of this.
i know who i am and how i look.
rejection has a bile taste that stains the tongue.
and for it, this is what i have to show for living.
i was brought into this world
and as i am is someone who is going to kill herself.
and before i die im gonna make myself beautiful.
one day your going to forget me.
but im not gonna forget you.
im gonna haunt you with my beauty.
for all the days i was called ugly.
an outcast.
im gonna make you eat those words.
for im gonna carve myself anew.
but for you im gonna screw with you until you have a permanent smile on your face.
A contest entry
- Want To Win a Contest? by ArmorXForXSleep.
360 points, ended July 31, 2007, 154 entries
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humm I really like this poem it has a lot of emotion and a good flow i like the story in it about the girl w with los self esteem and I like the ending as well this is and overall good poem and good luck
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Please refer to rule number 2:
2. Any type of genre is fine except the following: [[Emo suicide, non-Emo suicide, wrist cutting,]] blood, pain, religious or anything that has to do with God, a spiritual form, etc. or anything so abnormally happy that I puke.
The ones with [[]] are the ones I believe you broke. As well, you didn't use propper grammar seeing as "ive" is not a word and it is spelled "I've". I said non capitalization is okay, and I abide by that, but non apostraphes are not.
Thank you for your time and effort. If you'd like to rewrite it (propperly) please IM me and we can talk about it.
In the meantime, this will be removed from my contest.
Thank you,
Tori -
beautiful
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