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To All The Boys I've ever known...except for a special few.

Your peircing eyes
See through my soul
They see how I really feel
When no one else knows

I think that you hate me
you ignore me, belittle me and more
My heart cries for you
But your making it sore

My eyes are out of cries
My tears turn red
You're killing me now
Making me bleed 'til I'm dead

A broken heart I have now
As you turn away
You stand there and laugh
As my feelings decay

If I feel for you again
As I did once before
Stop me I'm begging you
Before I bleed more

The love that I felt
Was just fiction it seems
But now what is maiming me
Is you in my dreams...

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  • forever - silenced
    May 2, 2007

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    WOW

    This is full of so much raw emotion! Guy are retarded like that! They really don't have a clue most of the time! love yooooh! x


  • TheMuffinSlayer
    April 13, 2007

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    Full of sorrow

    This piece is very depressing, and well, guys can be like that, if you haven't noticed, we're kinda emotionally detached lol.
    Love you,
    Matt