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I knew it / I can't forget / Can I

I knew it
I was right the whole time
You thought you were the "smart one"
But it turned out all wrong

I knew it
I warned you so many times
But you choose not to listen
To my wise words about him

I knew it
He never took you anywhere
And now you regret the whole ordeal
You want to pretend he doesn't exsist

I knew it
So you finally broke it off with him
Then you decide you want him back
Why would you do that to yourself again?

I knew it
You yelled at him the other day
He slapped your friend,
You should have slapped him
But you were too afraid

I knew it
He broke your heart and I told you so
Now you want to forget
And get on with your life but......

I can't forget
I knew him first
I loved him first
You took him away

I can't forget
I still love him
And I can't let go
I need him so much

I can't forget
I want him to be mine
But I don't think that is going to happen
I don't know how I feel anymore

I thought I loved him
But now I see what he did
It hurts me so much to hear this from you
That he did all these things that I don't know are true

Can I forgive and forget?
Can I really go on with my life?
Can I go on being friend with both you and him?
Can I stop loving him?















Author notes

Just how I really feel about someone and yes this really happened just the other day

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  • InMemoryofCharlieJr
    April 16, 2007
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    Thank you for the comment. I've been thinking about that, if I ever did end up with him I would hope he'd not treat me like that. If he did he would be out less then 3 months unlike her.


  • amandapoet15
    April 16, 2007

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    hey this poem is kinda sad. just look at how he treated that girl, maybe he treats u the same way, and u just can see. well idk. good poem though. thanks for sharing!


  • InMemoryofCharlieJr
    April 15, 2007
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    Thank you so much for your comment. I appriciate it.


  • Tabitha-Robin
    April 15, 2007

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    Wow this is sad and full of emotion. It breaks a heart into many pieces. But very good expressed. It was a fine read and full of talent. Keep writing my friend. I hope peace and love finds you this day. God bless you in all that you do.

    Tabitha