Red and yellow paint
Ready for battle
Spirit bear ready
Tall and proud
No one can deny him his chance
Ready to lead his people into battle
Spirit bear! We hear your words brother
We sing for you
Be strong for your people
They need you at your best!
Go forth warrior
Your time is now!
A contest entry
- . by Peace and Quiet.
445 points, ended May 1, 2007, 8 entries
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This is a very spirited piece with a lot of dignity.
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Thank you for entering. Strong feelings, here.
I'll comment more fully as I'm judging. -
I had a feelinmg you would enter this contest. You write with such passion. I think you could expand even more on it if you wanted to. I feel I am left hanging.
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WOW!!! My friend, What a read this one is!! I loved every word of it!!! You have a fabulous way with writes like this!!! Fantastic!!! Best of luck in the contest! Keep that pen flowing!
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