No matter where you are or what your doing
Without notice rytham is always pursuing
Speaking a language making us whole
In sequenced notes reaching our soul
Melody enhances the smell of our mind
Entertained with timing deranged find
Tuning into play prolonging the hearts perfect beating way
Dancing carelessly into the epic of the body released pray
Flowing in key within range
In a shower or on a stage
As every aspect of who you are
Is written by the future music star
As a solo within your favorite band
Or the musician able to be the fan
Maybe the individuals strumming hand
Even the crisp solitare of animals land
The love of music makes the world go round
Blowing through the inner wave of each sound
A moment to lift your feet off the ground
Magic moments leading us to the next crowned
Author notes
To me this image speaks volumes of sound. While there is nothing to hear by ear there in stillness speaks how alive all that he is. The contentment on his face brings sounds to my imagination of where he is going or where he has been. there's music of a star in colors adorned representing loudly how proud to be he is. When I look at him my mind goes from the sound of pow wows within to a warrior of the land battling in origin to the great culture of the native americans whose spirits awe all creations in the rytham of life.
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- . by Peace and Quiet.
445 points, ended May 1, 2007, 8 entries
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Thank you for providing the author notes. I did not understand this without them. I love the notes..I wish you had written a little less cryptically. Your heart was in a good place with this.
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Thanks..that helps..'rhythm'...that's one I have trouble with, too..It just won't stick in my head..lol
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Thanks for the entry. Interesting..Honestly, I'm not sure I understand this or how this relates to the pic..If you want to add a short note in the authors box..you can.
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Rock and Roll hotchie-coo..................joe
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