Sailing
Setting sun and rising moon
And flickering pins of light
In my sail the wind will swoon
Like whispers in the night
Instant breeze upon my face
North by north as I take flight
Gourmet sailing in the night
I love to sail…
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this is lovely. lorcan my boyfriend loves sailing...i miss him
but lovely poem, and take care
stephanie ♥
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I've been sailing once, in Virginia, and will never forget the experience. I love this! I am a huge fan of Acrostic formed poetry and you've done this word so much justice. The vision you've created for the reader is stunning, I can smell the salty air and feel the breeze caress my cheeks. Very well done!
Bella
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Thanks, this is old... hehe I had to come here, I forgot that I wrote it.
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It's nice to dig a bit
You're very welcome!
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Once again very beautiful with the chant in nice meter. I like the first two lines very much. Setting sun and rrising moon, I visualize this very well. Flickering pins of light is very good also.
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What a gorgeous image you have portrayed here in this write. The Peaceful breeze can be felt as you have us sailing off.
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I agree with my friend Lexie, this is very similar to a lullaby. I will bet your elves and elfettes just adore this one.
very sweet write Amera, would even make Preemies breath better.
Dad
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Beautiful
This is as gentle and soothing as a lullaby,
i can close my eyes and imagin the gentle rocking of the boat, and the moon light upon the ocean,
what a wonderful write
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Follow the occulting lighthouse beam. I'll be waiting by the dock. Three bunnies for this.
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Holy Moly!!
Oh My
What an Acrostic!!
I Love this Amera
Gorgeous and boy do I have a link for You since You like to sail...
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rup1krU4WG4
Love this!! Just smile after inhaling...
Beautiful presentation
Thank You for sharing
Many blessings to You!!
Best wishes too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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