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Deadbeat Bother -HM


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Scribed in sand and washed asunder
by a wayward wave, it leaves shore
weeping with its watery disappearance.

Cut from cloth and nappy, buckled
ribbon gathered to a sharp edge
of wanting more than frilly fondness.

A jagged sign scrolling across a ticker tape
measurement of scars and scores
of something not quite right with mass and matter.

This knotted-handful of youthful lust
is beaten to death by an earthly angst of age
that marks its death pulse by pulse.

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  • Lyre-Bird-
    April 13, 2007
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    Firstly I want to thank you for entering the contest and following all the rules........
    Your entry has been added to the finals list!!!!!

    wish you the best of luck!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

    Tracey

    *the finals list is in no set order, Judging takes place after the closing of the contest..............


    • CarolDesjarlais silver member
      April 14, 2007
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      Thank you, lyre-Bird, love and its symbols have been so maligned for so long....I wanted to show that in the poem... ty for the HM.