I'll sever your limbs
I'll slit your throat
I'll shred your skin
I'll tear your flesh
I'll break your bones
Grind them to dust
Fill my needs
Let free my lust
I'll crack your skull
Split it in half
I'll crash your brain
Smash it with a bat
I'll let loose your blood
Drink it in a cup
I'll cut your hair
Give it to hospitals
For the unlucky
With hair cancer
I'll eat your eye bealls
With some spaghetti
Chop you with a machetti
I'll take your heart
Into my palm
Squeeze it hard
Or throw it at the wall
I'll put a block of cement
On your leg
Sinking you to the oceans bottom
Drwoning you dead
I'll take your pieces
Feed them to sharks
Tie you to a tree
Send you off to
Fall off a waterfall
I'll carve my name
On your forehead
Shoot you dead
Feed you to rats
I'll strech you
Till you die in screams
Dislocating all of
Your body bones
I'll burn your body
Clothes and all
Make you tremble
Yet i've said nothing
To you at all
I'll hang you from
Your skin on metal hooks
Crush you on
A needle bed
I'll freeze you
Make you into an icecube
Burn you in lava
Tie you in chains
And dip you ino
A pool of acid
Too much torture?
No, just somethin evil.
Author notes
I wrote and this is what came out a week ago.......................................
A contest entry
- Murder by Blossom.
350 points, ended May 3, 2007, 20 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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Comments
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wow nice rite now i feel like ............
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Nice work
I can taste lunch, a little -
very good but bealls is surpose to be balls and drwoning is surpose to be drowning, Best luck in the cotest.
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Quite the gruesome piece of mayhem and deviance.
The hair lines were funny.
You are a pitch little souled creature


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I love the evil theme. It's great. Very nice piece of work!! Thanx for entering.
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a little graphic and just...... gruesome....
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