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You & I

            I                                                You
      Was cast away                            trampled, ignored
  Was just pushed aside         always did any and everything
Wasn’t worth thinking about            were able, but never stopped
Was saved for another day            didn’t worry about any others
  Own no opinions and                  used whatever was available
      Just wish that                never apologized for anything
        Meant something              could not be normal at all
          See, however,                    never seem to want
            Am nothing at all                to be bothered
              Am but a dirty stain            seem shallow
                Just seem to embarrass          knew that
                  Annoy and also          meant to bruise
                    Nauseate              hurt on purpose
                        Needed to be      understood and
                        Wanted to be        had to be
                          Loved                Hated.

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  • Sam-Heartagram
    June 17, 2007

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    Friggin Amazing

    I absloutely love it
    it has such power coming form it
    and i love the broken heart
    its friggin amazing


  • The Existentialist
    April 23, 2007
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    wow

    this was great. kickass. the emotion totally rocked. and i love the broken heart design with the words, seperateing the person and you, as well as the choppy way you wrote it out. it made it much more raw, which it should be. you rocked this. awesome job.


  • iwasakaleidoscope
    April 20, 2007
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    i just told you but ill say it again
    i like it... a lot :]

  • Buried in Black
    April 14, 2007

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    I have never seen this layout before. this so orignal and amazing. how everything was set up, and how each line went back to the first word, god this is great. amazing job. Love it all, and you the most