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My Pain Inside of Me

I'm so cold
no one cares
everyone hates me

I'm hated ever by my family
I was abandoned
I now live in darkness

What can I do?
my body is weak
but my heart is weaker

All I want is love
I want someone to love me
I need to find it, before I do give up

How can I find it?
everyone hates me,
no one understands

But then I do find love
someone finally understands me
they understands my pain

But now i'm confused
they have to share my pain,
I can't let them share this pain

I will protect them
I won't let them share my pain
But how?

I will keep my feelings to myself
I will keep them inside
So no one will get hurt because of me

They will keep loving me
ever if they know they can't save me
but I will let them love me for as long as they want

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  • purpledragonfly
    July 16, 2007

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    So Sad!!! But Congratulations on the trophy I don't know that much about this stuff, but I like the write... kind of depressing, but then again --- what isn't ??? hehee JUMPING!!!!!!!!!!! MamaB


  • Sle3p
    July 16, 2007

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    is that yuki-kun? I think it is. Anyway this is so good tina! I realy liked it makes me think about gaara wich is always a good thing. great job

    -maddie


  • Emo Cowboy14
    April 15, 2007

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    washtay

    it means good in lakota. but yea i do like the poem. your realy a good wrighter. and i can relate to it.


  • PoetBoy2008
    April 13, 2007

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    I liked it i can relate to that poem i felt like that at one point in my life but eventually i broke down and the outcome was not pretty. but yes it's a great poem i like your style keep it up.


  • GiftedPsychosis gold member
    April 12, 2007

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    Awww... This is so sweet. And sad. Very sad. Why are the shows you watch so sad??? Or books. Whatever. You know what I mean. You need to read HAPPIER stuff! Leave the dark stuff to me. My room is black.
    But very lovely poem. Like I said, sweet.
    Great job!
    -GP

  • Sle3p
    April 12, 2007
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    you so have to lend me that book so i can read it this poem sounds good,and i saeted a new manga its realy good its about this animal mythical beast and its sorta like that thing in the lactose lake or something but this girl meets it and it kissed her,and the beast turns into a 9 year old boy and when it get back in the water,it turns back,its wierd and it cant talk in there language U GOT TO READ IT TINA!love ya i liked it i look forward to seeing more of your poems later!!!


    -maddie

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