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*Don't Love Me*

Don't love me
For all the things
I did and said

Don't love me
For all the times
I wished I were dead

Don't love me
For I had commited
So many sins

Don't love me
For I had lied to you
Once again

Don't love me
For all the times
I made you cry

Don 't love me
For all the times
You wondered why

Don't love me
For all the times
I had failed

Don't love me
For all the times
I ran and bailed

Don't love me
For I had lied
Once again

Don't love me
For these are my
Commited sins.

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  • missin-my-Marine
    January 7, 2008

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    this is

    really sad. but once again it seems like you have written somethings so like my own work lol great mind think alike.


  • Xxpain-is-beutyxX
    May 31, 2007
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    this is the BEST damn poem i have EVER read!!! no joke i LOVE it!!!!


  • BeautifulDisaster9
    May 1, 2007

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    WHOA!

    This hit me damn hard. Amazing, really! I absolutely loved the repitition in it. It made your point that much stronger. Keep writing.

    Oh and great rhyme scheme!

    <3BeautifulDisaster9