Say it now,
before he leaves,
tell about that romantic dream.
Let him know,
it's not that hard,
this is your chance to speak your heart.
Only ten more minutes,
just spit it out.
Something,
anything,
to let him see,
this feeling is eating at you desperately.
He's turning the corner,
he's out of sight.
You let go of your moment
without a fight.
That was your last chance,
to speak your heart.
A contest entry
- Titles For Everyone!!! by AllYoullNeverHave.
450 points, ended April 13, 2007, 23 entries
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that was pretty nice. it is very true. i can see how it is true. -
if that's true, it's so sad...I can relate to that, definitely. But I loved the way it flowed, and that it told of something typical in high school without being cliche...it was extremely original. loved it.
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Makes me think of high school...and hidden crushs..i like this.
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Cool. That's what this makes me think, 'cause this poem is cool... I don't know. It's late. But I like the rhyme pattern and I love how you told this ever-so-typical tale. Great write. Thanks for sharing!
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Wow. That was good. I can relate to liking a guy but not wanting to tell him... *sigh* Anyways, good job. I like the rhyming. Very smooth flow. Good job. Thanks for enterng. Good luck.
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aww this is so sad. reminds me of back in the day, when i'd have feelings for a guy and i wouldn't tell him. then it'd be too late and my best friend woudl be with him. this happens all too often! good poem. ur an awesome poet. keep up the good work!
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