Today I bought a new gun
and a bullet yes just one
Tonight I'll have some fun
I'd let you come but I can't
For you to watch me I can't
Run away until you can't
I don't care about life
I ain't scared no more
I don't need you love anymore
I can't stand this no more
I'm headed for that open door
Tonight is the end of me
I know I'm my own enemy
I don't blame you
There is no way to
I'm just tired
I need a break
No promise did I break
I deserve a peaceful death
So go leave me like the rest
For Finally I get to rest
Finally Peace At Last
A contest entry
- Murder by Blossom.
350 points, ended May 3, 2007, 20 entries
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Comments
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Not exactly what I was looking for, but overall, nice job. Good luck.
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I....
That has to be some of your best work..
but I do know writings of that nature are not made up...they come from someplace real. That are felt...and you are very good at expressing that...
-thanks for the pt clothes
-steph
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wow, well stated but sad. I just put one on here yesterday called "is it wrong?" - along the same lines, just stated differently. Unfortunately, too many people get these thoughts at times. Fortunately, we wait - and get our blessings.
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You and your death poems....Well I love the poem, well written as usual. Love it!
<3 Jenerali
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