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The Finer Things

What was once here
now is gone
The devils
that made this world wrong

Now theres peace
laughter and love
It is like a present
sent from above

Nomore crying
Nomore tears
Just smiles that
spread from ear to ear

The fear has dissappeared
The fear of evil
Is nowhere near

So take this gift
and make it last
because noone wants
to bring back the past

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  • ckwriter69
    April 16, 2007

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    Yes this Utopia would be grand to be free of all fear and unhappiness. It would be a finer thing. Thanks for sharing.


  • AllYoullNeverHave
    April 12, 2007

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    Interesting use of the title. It's very true though... at least for me... I know I don't want to bring back the past... lol... Anyways, Good job! Thanks for entering. Best of luck!