Twilight Hours are spent outside in the darkness
as the moon passes by and the moon shifts away i am still
here passing time away watching the moon,in a small pond
as the glimmering ripples in the water sway on and off
like a vent,when it gets cold the heat comes on
if it gets warm the air comes on,if i am sad the waves
are shallow and soft,if i am angry the waves are violent
and no longer peaceful,i am the waters pool sitting in the moon
the ripples go down my spine,and i feel the cold icy water
in the night at the twilight Hours of the night,
i look expressionless at the moons ripples and waves
like the moon is on earth and not in the sky at all
during the twilight Hours nothing is said,except the
whispers in the cold wind,with no coat in winter
sanding motionless in front of the almost frozen water
twilight Hours our almost over,i look in to the setting sun,
and i see the sun coming over the horizon,i look at the
water and it looks at me with the sun in its shimmering water
now not the twilight Hours any more,and the water warms
from the suns heat,the sun is set,and i jump in
A contest entry
- Titles For Everyone!!! by AllYoullNeverHave.
450 points, ended April 13, 2007, 23 entries
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Comments
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This is so unique. I love it's quality and depth. This shows a real maturity - so much so that I nearly fell off my chair when I saw how old you are. You have a real potential - please keep writing! x
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Very... interesting. A little wierd but I like that. I like things that are different. Very descriptive and creative. Good job. Thanks for entering. Good luck.


