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Come Soon



Huddled in darkness
only a few months to go,

Secured in bliss
As you steadily grow.

New feelings and sounds
you've never heard before,

With leaps and bounds
Your life won't be a bore.

Boy or Girl
Time will show,

Families in a whirl
and can't wait to know!

So grow healthy and grow strong
no matter what you may be,

Because come soon and not long,
When you'll meet mom and me.


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I used this title of yours to write to my unborn son due May 3,2007

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  • Lost Like Woah
    October 18, 2007

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    this is not only very sweet, but also filled with love. you have a wonderful sentiment expressed here. you can feel the love for your unborn child through out the entire poem.


  • sweetpearl
    April 13, 2007
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    Aw this is so adorable and I don't say that very often. Usually loveydoveybaby poems don't strike my fancy and maybe it's a phase I'm going through right now but this is so cute. May 3 is coming up really soon will this be your first child? This will put a smile on anyones face.