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Rise and Shine

The sun comes knocking at quater past nine,
Asking if I'm ready to rise and shine.
I wonder what I'm gonna do today,
As I get up and put my dreams away.

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  • Medicore Fluff
    June 10, 2007
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    wonderful

    very neat! I love the last line so much

  • Freedom comes
    April 24, 2007
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    ooohh very sweet! I hadn't realised how many poems you churn out, love! I have to do ELit work now (coz I was up most of the night doing my ELang assignment lol) but I'll check to see what I've missed, becuase I'd hate to miss your beautiful poems. xxx (P.S. would gove you more applauses but I just used 3 on ya!)


  • Vicky Shwepps
    April 12, 2007
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    aww, i love it. reminds me of childhood, suprisingly. xxxxx