Being very ‘Emo’,
Drowning in misery.
Unrequited love
Is really not for me
And the pending question:
‘Are these feelings real?’
Not a conforming ideal
But things I truly feel.
Is she the perfect girl?
Or a placebo for my needs,
Filling a desire for love
Upon which My Heart feeds
I appear to write poems
For attention do I plea?
Give me the answer to
What is happening to me?
Author notes
I generally can't intepret my own feelings very well. This is my attempt at dissecting them though, I really dont know whats going on with me anymore...
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A contest entry
- It;s A Love Type Of Thing by paintitblack1001.
300 points, ended June 12, 2007, 42 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Tell me what you think about this poem. Please I want to know about mistakes ive made and how to fix them, and also if you liked it or not....
Comments
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this isn't really what i was looking for but it's stil a great write
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Wow
You really kinda sound like me. I don't try to interpret my feelings anymore. Its to hard.
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