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Never and Again

Can I close my eyes - to not see your false love
To be given no more lies - can I hear no more
Can I fold my hands - to never feel your skin again
To never kiss you - can I press my lips & hold my tongue
Can I loose hope - to protect my heart again
To never love you - can I die all over once more
Can you leave me - to never hurt me again
To never happen - can I turn back time
Can I forget you - to never remember again
To always love you - can I ever be set free
Can I cry only once - to never cry over you again

Author notes

I tried a new way of writting my poem - - - after crying myself to sleep about every night, I was tired of it all, and wrote this. I hope you like it - it's how my heart hurts still...

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  • I hate it when you feel a lot of pain. This was a deep poem, and someone like you should never have to feel hurt. I enjoyed the new way you put this together it helps with the feeling of the over all poem great work thank you for reading my poems that always means a lot SH


  • Drewce
    April 13, 2007

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    Hey good/sad write JLynn. I'm sorry for whatever happened. Love hurts but not as much as no love lol yes it does lol so how've you been?