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How My Heart Was Saved

How can I speak to this, my center,
The ruling aspect of my life?
The words are old and worn,
And none can near suffice!
Many times I thought 'twas captured,
Only to be turned astray;
Then Lo my hope was answered,
The greatest, here to stay.
In a way most unexpected,
At a time of high despair;
With my rules in place, then broken
You came to my repair!

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Again, a thanks to my own personal kinght-in-shining-armor, Vic, for rescuing me from settling for less.

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  • Lyre-Bird-
    April 13, 2007

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    Firstly I want to thank you for entering the contest and following all the rules........
    Your entry has been added to the finals list!!!!!

    wish you the best of luck!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

    Tracey

    *the finals list is in no set order, Judging takes place after the closing of the contest..............


  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    April 12, 2007

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    WooHoo! Well said. He must know what an amazing princess he has! Great write. Best of luck in the contest.

    Jeannie


  • YoursTrulyJulie gold member
    April 12, 2007

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    Yay !

    Well done on another beautiful poem for your beloved Vic I wish you all the very best of luck in this contest.