I slice down my arm,
and then watch as I bleed
I do it once more,
for that's what I need
Blade across my skin,
making it's path
Soon all will witness,
my hateful demented wrath
Ringing in my ears,
pounding in my heart
Soon this blade will leave me,
lost in the dark
Blood thick and warm,
runs from my veins
Nothing seems to matter,
for I've gone insane
Click from the knife,
tearing through my skin
All else have lost,
but my insanity wins
Blood covered silver,
now shimmers and shines
Under a blanket of red,
that looks so divine
Tickle sensation,
runs through my arm
It slightly makes me smile,
so I cause some more harm
Again the blade trickles,
against my left wrist
Blood again pours out,
but wait there's a twist
Poison injected,
into my right side
A needle with venom,
starts to make me high
My blood comes out quicker,
faster then before
Now my wrist is shaking,
and it starts to feel sore
My heart it pounds faster,
my head starts to spin
I'm having so much fun,
so I stick some more in
Again the poison enters,
into my blood stream
Looking at my blood again,
some poison can be seen
My muscles tense up,
it's harder to stand
I slap myself in the face,
cause I'm just as strong as a man
The venom injected,
my blood running free
I'm lost in my chaos,
now it's harder to see
I try to stand up,
but quickly fall down
I laugh cause it's funny,
but soon I begin to frown
What began as some fun,
turns dangerously bad
My temper is rising,
because now I'm mad
I didn't mean to go this far,
it wasn’t my plan
I need to stop the blood,
so I think of all that I can
My blood still pours like a river,
never seizing for a break
I've done something wrong,
and scream for my life's sake
I stop and I listen,
to the beat of my heart
It starts to beat slower,
and things start to go dark
What has happened,
I am wondering as I open my eyes
Nothing has happened,
and somehow I'm still alive
With a grin on my face,
and my knife in my hand
I do it all over again,
cause that's how I am
No longer do I fear death,
but death is now afraid of me
For he is the lock to my inner demon,
and I am the key
Author notes
This sort of just came to mind, and the more I thought, the longer it became. I like it, cause this is my style I guess.
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I love it especially the ending
This is one of the best entries in this contest so far -
this was a really great poem..i can really relate to what you wrote about and the emotions you expressed,,this was very well written and flowed great keep wriitting your very talented
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amazing poem i love it i like the flow and just the whole thing well done thank you and good luck
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Good Job
awesome poem i generally don't like reading poems with a bajillion stanzas but it actually entertained me...good job
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dude i like it but. . . .
when i read it it gave me the chills and i had to hold my wrists cause i could see it in my mind as i read it!!!! very good but scary too!!!! i luv it!
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Ohh i love how you ryme and stuff.
Its really good.
Keep it upp!
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Wow, me and my friends really like this poem
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that's cool. you write like me... (in my eyes) lol.. but thx for entering good luck
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WOW, definanlty demented, but written well. Very disturbing content, but is real life!
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Wow okadokie..you took the words outta my mouth. I feel like that all the time and you've conveyed it very well. Good JOb!
Mandi
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hope you never do it tho..okie.
but..this would be quite funny if it happened to me... -
mmmmmm!!!blood....ur poem has made the HeartbrokenVampire hungry...beware!!!
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You are sooo very good at this style. The flow and the rhyming are impecable....and the words paint a picture, wonderfully, I can see it all very vividly. The last stanza is amazing..."and I am the key"..love it!! Great write!!
Whyitt xxx
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