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It Rains

It rains against the window pane.
It rains into my memory.
It brings many me back many years,
When life was full of amusement.
It rained and made heavy puddles
That I dreamed they were miny lakes.
The brown leaves that drifted and floated
Were little sailboats sailing.
The rain was pouring heavily
Yet it was pouring warm.
I came outside letting it pour on me,
The warm waters of serenity.
Creating music with whatever it touches,
A variety of rhythm and beats.
The thunder added a little suspense
As the rain shadowed every calling.

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  • reckless abandon
    May 12, 2007
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    very discriptive, and a very beautiful poem


  • Atrophya
    May 2, 2007

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    i love the rain when it's like that. it's always so beautiful. im glad you've seen the rain in this light. it is beautiful!

  • BadExample
    April 12, 2007
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    excelent descriptions, you've created a world that the reader wants to visit...keep writin