There once was a lady named Bea
She ended each sentence "teehee"
She got on my nerves
So I aimed for her curves
And kicked her downhill with GLEE!
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OK, found a way to reenter this one, as you do not allow prewrites, and we both prefer this one (darn AP for taking that contest notation away) I simply redid it hehe, hope that is ok?
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A contest entry
- A ROUNDS CONTEST WITH A DIFFERENCE by CitrineSunrise.
900 points, ended April 19, 2007, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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She would get on my nerves too. The "the" in the last line throws the rhythm off. Perhaps you should amplify "glee" instead.
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noted and edited, see if that is better
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