I ache for love
I bleed for love
I call for love
But love doesn’t listen
I thirst for love
I fatigue of love
I hunger for love
I die of starvation
I serve my love with passion
I beg of love with desperation
I live of love’s compassion
I’m done being love’s possession
Author notes
Long story short, a relationship doesn't work if only one person is trying.
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o my amazing
wow, this poem is...what i feel right now..i am searching for love or someone to love me..but in the end feeling like a slave of love lmao...cool poem..thanks for writing it out..it makes me feel like i am not alone in feeling this way..the way ur poem connects to me...TREMENDOUS write!
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Isn't that the truth! Great write!
Peace,
Azlyn
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deep
girl... that was really deep... i really dont know what to say but... i think i know how you feel... -
very nice poem
just a little thg if u may please.
in the second stanza u broke the flow by saying: i fatigue' of 'love coz with "for love" u had nice rythm and that "of" came right in the middle.
hope u forgive me for critisizing but i really loved the poem and i just want it to be perfect.
peace.
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