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core


Magenta chambers send
a rush of oxygenated joy
through my very being.
A pulse racing
with the excitement
of joining with you;
entwined together,
legs, arms and hands
a confusing mix.
Every pocket of
my inner soul filled
with hope;
[the longing having
been consummated]
A crimson flush permeates
my essence,
the core belongs to you now,
and you alone.

 

 

 

 

 

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  • Lyre-Bird-
    April 13, 2007

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    Firstly I want to thank you for entering the contest and following all the rules........
    Your entry has been added to the finals list!!!!!

    wish you the best of luck!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

    Tracey

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