The pieces of this house, crumbled beyond repair
bricks and mortar unbroken, stained with green dispair.
thruth lay murdered in violent rage,
in a crumbled house, a sturdy cage.
A contest entry
- Great things come in little packages by The Order of Chaos.
650 points, ended May 8, 2007, 38 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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wow, you're a really good poet too!! i write poetry better than stories ^^


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Haven't seen anything by you in a while...but my this was worth the wait!




