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Sturdy Cage

The pieces of this house, crumbled beyond repair
bricks and mortar unbroken, stained with green dispair.
thruth lay murdered in violent rage,
in a crumbled house, a sturdy cage.

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  • AngelOfBetrayal
    June 21, 2007
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    wow, you're a really good poet too!! i write poetry better than stories ^^

  • spanner
    April 12, 2007
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    Haven't seen anything by you in a while...but my this was worth the wait!