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Death By Desire

I feel alone
No one, no friend,
I sure as hell wish
My life would end;

I feel forsaken,
Depressed, forlorn;
My life is a punishment
For being born.

For food and sleep
I have no desire;
This misery consumes me
In its raging fire;

I know I'm screwed-up,
I ache feet to head;
I pray to God to
Strike me down dead.

I'm sick of the tears,
That sting as I cry;
Oh, My Dearest Lord,
Please, I need to die. 

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  • Liquid memories
    April 15, 2007

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    Deeply touching

    Yes you need no sympathy, but the pain is definitely there. for you. Your pain is deep, share it and it will ease. I know, been there. Jules.


  • Bazza
    April 12, 2007
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    LadyJaneErr

    You are wrong for you are not looking hard enough lol If you want help you only need to ask for I am but a keyboard away, but it is your choice. I don't normally comment on poems like this but it is so well written and poignant I decided to but unfortunately one never knows on this site if one is reading fantasy or fact. Take care
    Bazza (Barry)


    • RockinToyotaChick
      April 16, 2007
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      To Bazza

      Hi Barry! TY for commenting and what you had to say!Please by all means , I'd love any help anyone wil give me! TY for changing my opinion aobut life in generel!

      PS: I love your works!
      Jackie/formerly LadyJayneErr/now:RockinToyotaChick