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Sparkle

Diamonds dripping desire enchant
On the gossamer fabric of infinity
Elusive, taunting my impotent reach

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  • phoenixonfire
    April 12, 2007

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    BEautifully penned magical write!! The words are so intense and emotion filled that I really adored the innocence and purity of the work!
    Thanks for entering and good luck!!
    preets


  • LunarSmallpox
    April 12, 2007

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    I adore this poem so much. The beginning alliteration is so nice. The final line delivers such a wonderful "punch" (cliched phrase) to the poem. Nice job.