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Eternal Sin

Thinking back now, it was the movement of life's never-ending
impromptu stage that gave me that added bliss--that need to be simply
adorned with acknowledgement; yet nothing became of surreptitious flow,
but it was the nothingness of unwashed, stained waters that kept
what remaining boundaries alive

Was I to be the saint's martyr?  Perhaps the longing of being for the
moment wasn't realized.  Thereafter, renewal came in formalities of
transgressed manipulations--no, more like recognitive abilities...

(We've) now have written an epilogue.

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  • Cupcrazy
    April 12, 2007

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    I really enjoyed this, great flow and form, a very captivating write. Bunny


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    April 12, 2007

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    you know i like this,this whole series is just amazing, you did a great job on this, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest