I have fallin' in love
Yet don't know what to do
He tells me he loves me
But pretends not to care
He knows how he feels
But still doesnt listen'
To his heart.......
I tell him that i love him
He says it back
When were with each other
Nothing holds us back
We are inseperable
We are in love
But why does he have to be scared
Why?
Because now....
I have fallin' in love.
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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wow
this poem is really good... but thats just how guys are they care but they dont want to show it...i dont really get it either and its pretty stupid but hey, thats just guys for ya... Anyway this write is really good and i can totally relate!! Keep up the great work and i hope this boy straightens up for ya!!
Shannnon*Leah
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Neat, nifty and trim...short but well done poem telling of a too commom maladay...bravo...bravo...bravo...
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Great Poem
I liked your poem alot it had a lot of feeling. my favorite is when u question y he has to be scared bc im dealing with it to and im sure a lot of other girls are dealing with it to GREAT POEM -
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pretty good. a little shaky at the beginning. love poems arent really my thing but this ones nice. simply put but flashy or anything. sometimes guys are just like that. they suck with emotions... no offence guys. not all do but hes probably scared about resentment or being shunned. just tell him, it may help. nice write though =]
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