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Nature's Song



Spring blooms are bursting everywhere
as winter has now departed.
Birds sing their song of colors bright,
you'll ne'er be left brokenhearted.

Days growing longer, ever warmer,
laughter of little children heard.
Sweet melody softly playing
as I memorize every word.

While Mother Earth sings nature's song,
I'm dancing barefoot in the sand
and soft green grass between my toes
always helps me to understand.

This tune that's played for everyone
is Mother Nature's gift to all.
Come rejoice with me, sing along,
live, love and laugh, we'll have a ball.



Joyce Le Lievre
(sunny day)

© Joyce A. Le Lievre, All rights reserved
April 11, 2007

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An entry that I did for my group, The Titles Challenge Group.

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  • Amera gold member
    April 16, 2007

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    You are so good at rhyme! Every poem I come to of yours maken me smile. This one is no exception. It’s lovely and you just took my mind on a vacation… thank you

    Love,
    Amera


    • sunny day
      April 17, 2007
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      Amera, Thank you for the applauses and I hope you are enjoying that vacation, it's amazing what a title given can bring out of us. Your words of praise humble me to no end and always inspire me to do better. I thank you again. Love you my friend, Joyce


  • Rianna Bear
    April 12, 2007

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    very nice nature poem. felt like an ode to spring kind of piece. so full of beautiful nature, makes me want to go outside and run in fields of daisies.


    rianna

    • sunny day
      April 12, 2007
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      Rianna, Thank you very much for the applauses and your lovely words. Nature is something that inspires me on a constant basis. Spring is probably my most favorite times as I watch life begin anew for the gifts given to us. I'm very happy that this piece spoke to you as it did and it's how we should feel when we behold this beauty. Nature is an ode to spring itself as life begins anew for so much at this time. Love and God bless, Joyce


  • Firequeen
    April 12, 2007

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    Another truly beautiful and inspiring piece.
    You have such a talent.
    this expresses the beauty of nature so perfectly.
    BRAVO.
    Fire

    • sunny day
      April 12, 2007

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      FQ, Thank you for the applauses and your lovely words that are always so humbling to me. Your praise is ever inspiring. Nature is a gift that was given to us and the beauty we behold is something to cherish and nurture. I'm very happy that you enjoyed this piece so much. Love you my friend, Joyce


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    April 12, 2007

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    i love this poem i really do you have something here, and i am in a trance over it, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest

    • sunny day
      April 12, 2007
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      Aaron, Thank you very much for the lovely words my dear sweet friend. Those days of spring and nature's song can have that effect on people. I'm very happy that you enjoyed this piece so much and I thank you for the best wishes also. Love and God bless, Joyce


  • Viyanna Rosemarie silver member
    April 11, 2007

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    Come rejoice with me, sing along,
    live, love and laugh, we'll have a ball.

    sometimes laughter is the best thing in the world to cure and ail. a good write from you. good luck in this contest. viyanna rosemarie

    • sunny day
      April 12, 2007
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      Viyanna, Thank you for the applause and your lovely words. Laughter is good for the soul and it does have wonderful healing powers. Like the beauty of nature it can brighten up even the darkest of days. I'm very happy that you enjoyed this piece so much. Thank you for the best wishes also. Love and God bless, Joyce

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