I feel like I should put something here.
Feel like it should be something that matters,
Something that will bring another to self-realization.
I feel like what I say here should matter to someone,
Somewhere, somehow.
Somehow I don't think that is what I've been doing.
My life has been rather... matter-less.
Well I don't want that. I don't want to be meaningless.
I'm going to fight, I'm going to matter,
I'm going to be remembered by those I meet and see and
Talk to. Inside I may still hurt, but outside
I'm going to be different. Sometimes to change
You have to start from the outside and work in.
Outside, there will be a new me. Outside,
my life will be different.
I feel like I should put something here.
One day, I will. One day, it will matter.
Please tell me what you think
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Hoodwinked
I think you already wrote something that mattered already. Your words will be here for people to read and inspire for. -
Hood-Winked!
I am proud of you for making changes in your life and making a new start. It is very hard to do. Your writes I can so relate too and make me think. Great write.
You have just been Hood-Winked courtesy of the Poetic Bandits
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Love it. This is a ridiculously common thought that is next-to-never written about. I love your writing because it stirs up my thoughts--you write about things I remember, like you're writing from my bank of feelings and memories. You're awesome. Glad you're here! Take care.
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amazing
this is absoluetly wonderful. as always. luv ya.
holly
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like always you wow my with your poems keep it up
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I like this. It's easy to relate to.
Very awesome.
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I like this, and I think I get it.
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I think it does matter. You always have to start somewhere and I'm glad you are taking the chances. I wish you luck with it and I hope you get what you want.
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I like this, because alot of people could relate to it and the whole "change" concept and wanting to become something better, per say. Fine writing Nick. Great job
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I hear ya. I went through this same stage not long ago...I finally decided things were gonna change and I started the new year with a positive attitude. It's a great way to start, but it doesn't mean it's not still extremely difficult. So just hang in there though. I know you can make it.
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wow, this is awesome! sounds like great enlightenment! i love it! great write nick! and good idea.
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