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Sugar-Laced Poison

It's just the two of us
You hold me close and
You are blinded by your fear
You don't see me suffocating
You can't seem to let me go

I remember the days when
You were my world and
You gave me wings for me to fly
You gave me my own wings but
You can't seem to let me go

How am I supposed to touch the sky
When you put these chains around me
How am I supposed to fly
With these bloody wings?
You're killing me, killing me

Your love is a poison to my soul
Your words are a poison to my heart
Your eyes are a poison to my body
Your smile is a poison to my mind
You're killing me, killing me

You force feed me this sugar-laced poison
At first it didn't hurt, I didn't know
From the very first day you've been killing me
At first it didn't hurt, I didn't care
But you'll never let me go

How am I supposed to touch the sky
When you put these chains around me
How am I supposed to fly
With these bloody wings?
You're killing me, killing me

It's just the two of us
You hold me close
You are blinded by your greed
You didn't notice my love die
You can't seem to let me go

You're so caught up in yourself
I didn't see, you poisoned me so sweetly!
You want me all to yourself, but it's not what I want to give
It hurts so badly, your love is poisoning my soul
You break me apart!

How am I supposed to touch the sky
When you put these chains around me
How am I supposed to fly
With these bloody wings?
You're killing me, killing me

How am I supposed to touch the sky
When you put these chains around me
How am I supposed to fly
With these bloody wings?
You're killing me, killing me

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This is one of my favorites. C:

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  • blondone
    July 17, 2007

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    Deep and powerful writing this one touches not only my heart but my soul you dug deep for these beautiful words that are oh so true your lovely talent shines with this write...


  • BloodKisses666
    July 8, 2007
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    very beautifully done my dea


  • Felix BlackHeart
    May 13, 2007
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    I like this. it's very wellw riten. thanx for entering!
    Felix BlackHeaart