I miss you
I am worried you’re not ok
Or maybe you’re to scared to come back my way
Please I pray to god every single minute,
That you will find your way back
I can’t let you leave me
Because even if no one else cares,
I still want you here
I miss you
Please come back to me
You told me you were sorry
If you come back,
I will let you make up for all the “sorry’s”
Please god I pray...
Send my guardian angel back to me
I still need him
You can’t take him away
Author notes
written: 4-10-07
option #7
A contest entry
- Just Another Contest You Won't Look At Or Are You Proving Me Wrong?!? by Xxthe angry gothxX.
800 points, ended July 12, 2007, 39 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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this is sad and touching. deep feelings are shared through the simplest poems.
-KP] -
Wow, I love this piece, its so simple and so easy to relate to for me. Me and my love of five years have been through everything. And seperated for a year and a half, and it was both our faults, but I just wanted to forgive everything to have him back because I wasn't ready to let go. So from one poet to another, keep holding on, hold on with all your strength and never let go!
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Because even if no one else cares,
I still want you here
Sometimes it doesn't matter if someone hurt you, or no one else thinks they're right for you. Sometimes, love just continues and forgiveness is the only option. Thanks for sharing.
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