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Sugar and Spice

Sugar and spice
and everything nice
is just an allusion
to empty conclusions
of how so called perfect should be

but I plainly see..

the truth's contradiction
to painted convictions
is nothing but pain, hate, and grief

Sugar and spice
is so far from nice
It's a poisoned remedy

And it's killing me...
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
INFECTED!
A strange distortion
of failed abortions
(WHO ARE YOU TO POINT AT ME?)
Show no mercy
to those who worry
(WHO ARE YOU TO POINT AT ME?)

I am not your mother Mary
I am no angel or fairy
I'm a monster. I'm a beast.
I WILL TEAR YOU DOWN!

Don't condemn
you're just like them
Don't condemn
you're just like them

WHO ARE YOU TO POINT AT ME?!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Sugar and spice
and everything nice
is just an allusion
to empty conclusions
of how so called perfect should be

And it's killing me

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  • Crimson Ember
    April 27, 2007

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    Wow, Victoria. This is amazing, just like of your other works have been and are. You never cease to amaze me. You're great. And I love this poem.


  • ForeverJenn
    April 27, 2007

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    So..you wanna know what this is?? It is a fabulous work of art!! Jeeze! You wouldn't know good poetry if it bit you in the ass. The rhyming is pretty random..but still good. So..I want to hear you sing this. :]