entras por favor
mi amor
your lips upon mine
first touch
smooth and full
a split second
you want to savor
for an eternity
and still it only
gets better from here
sweet tongues slide
parting lips
swirling searching
for the sweetest taste
entras por favor
mi corazon
pulling you closer
i feel your bare skin
on my hands
and i feel it surge
through all of me
the urge to touch
all of you
intentional
but gentle
to feel the rolling curves
read the signs
feel the energy
of your body next to mine
entras por favor
mi querido
my hands search
your body
my tongue not far behind
im going to take it slow
cause i want to relish
before i devour
how bad do you want me
when you know how
bad i want you
entras por favor
mi amo
our bodies
are moving as one
crashing wave
can you feel my desire
with your hand
between my legs
swim in my ocean
crash on my shore
take my control
i dont want it
te quiero
te necesito
take me on
make me yours
in the most complete way
i want to give in to you
to ultimately submit
entras por favor
mi dominante
make me yours
i want to play
my ultimate dominance
is submission
i let you in
you ride me
as i move in rhythm
with your time
as i come to the top
you are mine
i feel your body
tremor all through me
and through your
trembling lips
you whisper in my ear
entras por favor
mi amor
Author notes
I think what turns me on the most is the subtle play between dominance and submission. So this contest has inspired my second foray into exploring my dominant and submissive sides.
A contest entry
- Tantalize me with your sensual words. by Angel With No Halo.
450 points, ended April 22, 2007, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Inspire me by matshadow.
800 points, ended May 2, 2007, 11 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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this one still has the steamy effect that excites so many of us... another grea write...well done. i love the foriegn language used in amongst it
cheers
jen
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Bravo
This was a great write. I love the foreign language... I gives it more of a romantic feel. I dont know the exact meaning of the words but they gave it the right touch -
This is a very subtle Dom & Sub poem. It was quite full of love and sensuality..(yur lucky I know some spanish.. or I would not have caught on to some of the spanish stuff.. lol. ) Anyhow.. thank you for your wonderful entry and good luck!!
~Krys~
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I am Lucky
Although, I like to think that somethings are somewhat universal. That even if you didn't know exactly what the spanish phrases meant, you could still gather the general idea. That's always my goal anyhow. It's like Shakira, I am not that fluent in Spanish that I always know what she is saying, but you can still get the idea of what's being said with just a little knowledge. Of course she has the help of musical expression, but that's what I try to do in my poetry when I am using other languages. I like to explore the dynamics of linguistics. Thank you for this challenge, it was inspiring.
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