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Say Goodbye

Say goodbye,
for you looked me in the eye,
and said,
goodbye to you,
for you are no longer
my love.

Say goodbye,
for you will,
never see my face again.

Say goodbye to you,
and all the things,
that I knew
and loved,
will be gone.
For you looked me in the eye,
and said
goodbye to you,
for you are no longer,
my love.
you will never,
ever,
be in my life
again.

Author notes

This poem I wrote during my choir class. its kinda sad, it almost made me cry cuz i started to think what i would do if my bf said this to me.

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  • capricornpoet
    April 24, 2007

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    sad

    How your feelings go up and down, from dark to light,..
    like a comet that glows then fades away till it comes back again ...