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Silence through my eyes

Silence only screams out from the mask
yet there is silence, no sound
it's all empty in your eyes
Your eyes become torn between two worlds
Two worlds have been tearing you apart
your eyes scream out for help
your voice was silent
silence is ringing in my ears
your help is silent
I simply stand there and watch you
watch you scream in a silent voice
your voice is still silent
There is no sound coming from your mouth
your eyes are still dazed within silence
I fall backwards and stare
at your eyes, the ones that haunt me
your body is simply just dead to me
What will happen if I raise my voice to you,
Will you break your silence for me?

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>.< Thanks so much to Myper and Mini Myper!!! Anyway I was suppose to write about stuff then I get carry away, Anyway, Please left your comment!!!

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  • Silver WolfDragon
    April 13, 2007

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    Heres the applaudes since Wolf is a cheapskate (aside from the fact he doesnt have points for it). XD

  • Wolf Rlysk
    April 13, 2007
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    Applaudes for you! You've already heard my opinion.


  • koppaspider
    April 11, 2007
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    Wow

    Wow this was an interesting poem. I would to pick on or two lines out of it, to tell you how awesome it was, but it all just flows so perfectly. This was a great write. When I was reading this I felt as though someone was ignoring you, and you felt lost, and alone. Is this what I was suppose to feel?


    • Fire Boy
      April 11, 2007
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      :)

      Yeah, that is right. I been feel like that for long. I'm deaf that why I can't hear their sound. And thanks for your comment! ^.^