Sunlight streaming through
Stained-glass windows of my soul
Stopped by jaded eyes
Author notes
Not much to say here. I know haiku are typically about nature, but I wanted to go outside with this one.
I know it basically sucks. But it's the first thing I've written in months, so I figured I'd post it. Maybe eventually I'll edit it into something else. Maybe a longer poem, but still in haiku structure, ie 5-7-5-5-7-5 like a series of haiku.
I don't know.
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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It is hard to say much with little. You have done that well. Very well.
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Brilliant!
I have just recently started writing haiku for public display. Some people have their own interpretations of what makes a "proper haiku". It is nice to see some of the traditions are still alive. Haiku is an art, lets keep it alive!
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oh i forgot this
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nice. it kind of seems a little forced at the end of the 2nd line... but i like it
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