As a child,
I saw her as "Mommy."
Bringer of life and joy,
Bringer of fun and toys.
Soother of sorrow and pain,
As she kissed the hurt away.
As a teen,
I saw her as "Mom."
Setter of rules,
Setter of boundaries.
Fountain of wisdom and strength,
As I struggled with myself.
Now an adult,
She is still "Mom."
I realize, she has her own troubles,
Problems that I do not know.
But, she was always there for me,
A favor I plan to return.
I am here for you Mom.
Always and Forever,
Love, Me.
Please tell me what you think
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wow this is grate!!! i never thought of the diffrent meanings of what a mother is to you when you grow up...i was realy pleased to relize it!!!
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I love the way you've dedicated this poem to your mom.
I believe every mom should get the honor for all the things she has done for us. You've portrayed your love for her in a wonderful way!
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This is a amazing poem it shows how as grow up not everything is what you imagined.I also loved how the mom and child relationship stayed strong even though its aware she has troubles.
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I liked this piece, very excellent. It also made me have the song Mother by Danzig stuck in my head, which is also a good thing, because I like that song and I haven't heard it in forever. Anyways, getting off track. I loved the free verse and the continued theme of how your relationship with your mother evolved. Good job.
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Thsi is a really great poem, keep up the good woek, and thank you so much for entering my contest, ♥ Christina
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I love this poem. I wish that I could still be a child. I wish that I didn't know the problems that my mother faces and the sorrow she has in her life. But I love her and I will do my best for her, every day of my life.
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excellent
i think this a beautiful way to commemorate the way your mom was there for you 5/5
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