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Vibrancy


Hibernations end
Strength gathered, of essential
Passage of darkness

Driven by passion
Praying arrival presents
Blooms of vibrancy

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  • Samplette gold member
    April 12, 2007

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    A pair of haiku. Very well written. Nice imagery. Thank you for entering the contest. You've done a great job.
    Sam


  • smiley
    April 11, 2007

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    Awesome

    this was awesome to read.. I am so glad to see you writing again.... I have always loved your work.

    Yvonne


    • Leance
      April 11, 2007
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      Thanks Yvonne.......
      I am sooooooooooo happy that I am writing too! It is coming very slowly, however, it is coming. I am thankful. It is such a struggle throughout the winter not being able to. But then through the spring and summer, my fingertips are sore....I am not complaining though!!! Never do something like that.
      Lots of love to you and the girls.
      Lisa


  • Know1
    April 11, 2007

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    Very nice little Haiku. It makes me think of the arrival of spring after a long harsh winter. Thanks


    • Leance
      April 11, 2007
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      Thank you Know1
      That is exactly what I was going after...
      If only the arrival of spring would get here...it just keeps teasing us here in Michigan....we are back in the 30's again. Snow on Easter, we were wishing each other Merry Christmas walking into church...
      Thanks for reading and commenting.
      Leance


      • Know1
        April 11, 2007
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        We've had some crazy weather here in Florida too. No snow though

        For a few weeks it was in the 80's then all of a sudden dropped into the 40's and 50's.

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