Signs of life I see
growing up all around me
gone is winters chill
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Signs of life I see
growing up all around me
gone is winters chill
Thank you for entering my ku contest. This is a wonderful haiku that describes the spring of the year very well. -
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Pollycheck
Thanks for your great words. glad you enjoyed.
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hey i love your poems they are all so great
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Welcome to Spring into Haiku!
A nice haiku about spring:
Signs of life I see
growing up all around me
gone is winters chill
You have the essence of the season written into your haiku, and the aspect of everything growing. Thank you for your entry and good luck in the contest.
Susie -
Hurrah! Winter is gone and spring has sprung. Good job. Lovely salute to spring.
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Ive never written one of these types of poems ,i feel they are a challenge beyond me lol,but you are more than comfortable with them , integrating nature with the rearing of the young and the happiness you get from that taking away the blues of life and winters chill
Well i think thats what it means but the beauty of these is they can mean lots of things to different people which makes them unique ,this is unique well done
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This is good! Winter stays in colorado until July though... hehe... just kidding... but it did snow last week! Great write! Rock oN! xoxo Meg
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