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Baby Be Mine

When I first saw you
I knew what I was feeling was true
And that I could never let you go
You were the one that changed everything in my life
And I knew that you are the one
Who would hold me all through the night
Your love is like no other
And from the moment I saw you
I knew we’d always be together
All I ask from you is Baby Be Mine


Even if my world doesn’t seem right
Still I’ll  be right there
I don’t know, maybe this is not love
But whatever it is
I know it was sent from up above
But there’s  one thing I ask of you
And that is Baby Be Mine


Whenever I’m down you’re always there
Wishing me to the top
And whenever I’m losing ground
You can turn my world around
You gave me strength, you gave me love
You comforted  me all through the night
Especially when I’m down
To wish my dreams come true
Under the moonlight
Baby, What I’m saying is true
So Please believe me
And Please don’t leave me
Cause all these feelings
I feel it all for you


When I first saw you
I feel like the whole world has stopped spinning
And all I can hear is my heart
Pounding and Beating
And whispering your name
I know that is crazy
But it’s not me to blame
It is my heart calling your name
Now that my world revolves around you
Tell me that you feel the same way too
Well , I guess this message ends right here
But Baby before you go I just want you to know
    Baby I love you so………

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  • Kwredneck11
    May 7, 2007
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    Amber this a awsome poem that you wrote!!!! well love ya allways
    *~ERIN~*
    ~*KWREDNECK11*~


  • Brett08
    April 13, 2007
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    i loved it and the message it was potraiting =]


  • XpushXmeXagainX
    April 12, 2007

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    Thats really good. It really shows that you care and love this person and te lines about your heart beating shows true passion and emotion. Good write.

  • BloodTearsDrop
    April 12, 2007

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    Amazing

    This is a very good poem!! Brother I miss you a lot!! I'm sorry I didnt get to talk to you yesterday!

    I love you

    *crystal*


  • Du-B Peng-N
    April 11, 2007
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    a few flow problems but all in all iz good poem!! You get a clappy...wear it with pride.


  • ckkie
    April 11, 2007

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    Good poem, you have lots of feelings, just no way to show them face to face. Ily Amber, stay the same.

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