there is no cure for suicide
although i am a survivor...
i used to cut
across the road not down the street..
i realized it was a sign for attention...
then i found a friend
who helped me
out of my deep end
hes the best that has ever happened to me
he kept reminding me that there is so much to live for...
and as a result of his efforts
i am here
alive
and trying to live more
than i have ever did before
he is the light that was invisible to my eye
now is the reason that i cry
its so beautiful
so wonderful....
there is no cure for suicide..
the most that you can do is to stay with them
through thick and thin
and here is something that anyone can do
don't leave their side...
and be sure to listen because maybe all they need to do is talk
i know that this helps
and this is coming from a person who has tried to complete the suicide walk
A contest entry
- Suicide - make it stop! by reinhardt-napoleon.
750 points, ended May 11, 2007, 36 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Well I must say, Several Attempts and friends get in the way, people try to judge you. They say they want to help you but I don't know. maybe there are a few that actually want to help, to be true friends but sometimes you need to find out on by yourself. Great Write.
Jordan Lee
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hi.
i would be happy if you continued, but it is great already, straight to the point and so true.
i like the (for now) last line. but what about this "title"?! it's really creative
thanks for entering and good luck (i'll applaud later when the contest closed)
Keep on writing - I'm keeping on!
Stop suicide.
Joey
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