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All Alone

All of the pieces fit together
Her's is the only one that won't
Is it to be like this forever
Should she just find a way to cope
All alone, all alone

Either nobody sees
Or nobody cares
There's a song in her heart
They don't have time to hear
Cause they each know their place
And they think she should know her's
And it hurts

There was a time when things were different
Those better days have come and gone
She pretends to be brave her head is lifted
But oh how she cries when she's alone
All alone, all alone

Either nobdoy sees
Or nobody cares
There's a song in her heart
They don't have time to hear
Cause they each have their place
That leaves no room for her
And it hurts
Either nobody sees
Or nobody cares
They all go on with life
As if she wasn't there
Cause they each have their place
That leaves no room for her
And she hurts, yes she hurts
All alone.

Author notes

This came to me one night while I was lying in bed. I couldn't sleep. This song just came to me. It's just about a girl who just doesn't seem to fit in the world that she has to live in. She is always on the outside looking in and everyone is either too busy with their lives to see, or they are too content to care. So she goes alone.

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  • Viyanna Rosemarie silver member
    April 16, 2007
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    ok, i have been next to tears all day and now i am there. this song is so my life it is pathetic. there is someone i love so much it hurts but....

    There's a song in her eheart
    eheart should be heart.

    thank you for sharing this with me. i could swear you wrote it about me. viyanna rosemarie


  • nobodys looking
    April 16, 2007
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    oh awesome poem!!!! Deffinatly how I feel sometimes.


  • April Renee
    April 16, 2007

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    i like this. seems like good lyrics to me. dont know much about them..but the chorus i believe it is is really nice. good job. enjoyed.

    blu


  • xXsuicidalXx
    April 16, 2007

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    wow

    that is like a perfect example of me, I hope you don't mind if I print it out and put it on my wall?*of course putting your screen name or name on it so not to be plagarized*


    • Sumthinlifeish
      April 20, 2007
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      Wow. I am honored that you would want to print it. Feel Free. I am glad that so many people feel like they can relate to this. hey, xXsuicidalXx as you read this, remember that poems are often about how thigs are in the present. but they don't have to be about the future. All hope is not lost.

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