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Tonight: The Purification

Looking in the mirror, I am startled:
never before have i see such
penetrating, determined eyes.
Tonight
another will truly get what he needs:
the help of my celestial powers.

Tonight I come to him,
pure, innocent,
a transulent white angel-
warrior against sexual demons.
Tonight
I take his body full force.
Tonight he will be cleansed.

I take his wicked body with my mouth,
slowly licking him from his
bulging chest
all the way down,
past a massive collection of firm skin,
finally to his sensory-indulgent toes.
Now for the next stage of purification:
manual.

I start from the top,
pulling at his hair.
Then I gradually draggg my nails down his chest,
opening his skin so that his demons
may escape.
He quivers,
lets out a deep moan;
I know it is working.
Again I find myself upon this mass of flesh,
this time massaging it,
preparing it for it's vital purpose
in my ritual.

Knowing that only I am capable of purifying him,
I take him into myself.
The battle is rigorous;
the fleshy gun of evil grows erect
and stabs my open hole.
I bear the pain willingly,
knowing that it is for the better.
He groans and screams as the demon
controls him, over-heating his body,
turning his face red.
He can barely breathe.

Soon neither can I.
This beast inside him is tearing at me,
sending shivers up my spine
and squeals from my mouth.

"Release," I order.
"Come out now,
before I explode!"

Suddenly, as if in response,
his back arches.
I can feel the demon running through him.
It shoots out from his skin,
straight up into my cleansing soul.

My body, in natural reaction,
immediately deactivates it's negativity
by releasing a mini-explosion of my own fluids.
The mess glues our bodies for a brief moment in time as he
smiles at me gratefully.

We both look down at the demon and his host.
The demon has been nuetralized,
and the host is now dormant.
My work here is done.

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  • silent bee
    April 28, 2007
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    this is great...i love the demon thing you have going on! and the last line is just perfect for the poem...she cleanses him and moves on! her work is done. this is a totally different taste of eroticism i got here, and i like it...its interesting! great write and i am so happy to have come across this piece!

    ~bee


  • Hersheys Kisses
    April 15, 2007
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    oooooh! you did an excellent job on this!!

    I love the "demon" reference, as to make...er..lust..be a demon..

    "Then I gradually draggg my nails down his chest,
    opening his skin so that his demons"

    LOVE the triple "g" effect! just makes you visualize slowly dragging nails...awesome!


  • Mistress Rose silver member
    April 14, 2007

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    Well this was different and interesting, I like it, I would have NEVER come up with anything like that, great imagination. Thank you for sharing this with us


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    April 11, 2007
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    i like this one i mean i really do, you did a great job on this. keep it going and keep it flowing


  • slipperssun gold member
    April 11, 2007

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    ok now that was different from just about anything that i have ever read... but i think you pulled your dare off... i did not see any of the banned words in there... well done
    cheers
    Jen


    • ScentOfCinnamon
      April 11, 2007
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      I know!

      It's so different from everything... it's just... yeah. But thanks!

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