The voice that makes you tremble,
Sends shivers down your spine,
Those eyes in which you gaze into
make you melt deep down inside
Those soft lips he uses
To tell those beautiful lies.
So easy to fall in love with,
Yet so easy to despise.
One mention of his name
Is all you really need.
One thousand thoughts now in your head
Of how e makes you feel
Please tell me what you think
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Wow
I really really enjoyed this poem , but you need to rewrite the ending so I can understand what you were trying to write , I loved these lines
"Those soft lips he uses , To tell those beautiful lies , So easy to fall in love with , Yet so easy to despise"
I really felt where you were coming from , Great Poem
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