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Too Late

Your words confuse me.
My head's filled with pain
As i repeat those words you said over again
I don't understand it,
You need to explain
You seem to treat this like a game
You said to me, you feel the same
But now i no longer feel that way
Over time emotions fade
And memories just drift away
You missed your chance for a clean slate
I'm sorry baby, this time you're too late.

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  • TimeAfterTime
    July 11, 2007
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    Ouch

    This is a really good poem , I liked the part where it says "Over time emotions fade , And memories just drift away , You missed your chance for a clean slate , Im sorry baby this time your too late" (and a reminder you spelled sorry wrong) Great poem