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Kiannas Dispair

My mind is in pieces, like there is two of me
  Thats because You wont listen to me
He died last year, In nibelheim
  Oh Sephiroth
He was like my idol
  He WAS your idol
Do I follow him? or just live my life
  Follow him you fool, he could change your life
My mind says follow but my heart says no
  I say you follow him, now listen and GO
How do I know what you're saying is true?
  Your heart failed you in the past, your mind is you
My heart says live but my mind says die
  If you live on you'll be living a lie
What do you mean? That I am a wreck to see?
  You are indeed, but I can set you free
How can you do that, you know, sett me free
  Jump into the fire and then you will see
How do I know that I can trust you
  Your heart lied, I know how happiness awaits you
All I have to do is jump into the fire
  Yes then you can be with your hearts desire

Author notes

This is about the time before Corel burned down in final fantasy 7, taking place 4 years before the game. Kianna (my creation for Sophias human form) is a schitophenic, and Sophia is in her mind. Sophia is trying to get Kianna to follow Sephiroth but She has doubts. This is the debait between them. Anyone who knows the story I created to go with Sophia will know that she was created at this time in the game, and was then in the angelic world, until the setting of the game itself. This is how Sophia was created.

The lines indented are Sophias words and the other lines are Kiannas. Kianna begins the poem.

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  • Disturbed Prodigy
    April 11, 2007
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    you know i love this right, you did a great job on this, i mean it, you are a great poet and just writer, keep it flowing